Writing

27/02/12
Missing in Germany === The wrathful man had glance of the little girl,then he slang his eye back around and walked slowly up to the little girl who was in a daunting situation she was very alarmed.Then the man looked at her then looked at the tall guy,,and said something that she couldn’t quite hear so she ran down to the way she came in but it was blocked by five huge bodies.she ran the other way with her tiny legs but there was no exit only a big red brick wall,so she cached up into the small corner and waited for something to happen,while she was sitting in the damp muggy corner she saw a deep narrow hole in the other corner, she quickly jumped in and waited for the men to come to the dead end,they came but they saw that she was no were to be seen,they didn’t even think to look in the little hole in the corner,when she heard them walk away she popped her head out to have look if there were any signs of them,when it was all clear she jumped out of the hole and sprinted back over the road to her Dad. === === Her Dad sounded so cross and so destraught,her Dad took her home and at the dinner table she told her Dad all about it.After about two months World War two struck out,her and her Father were Jews. Her Dad took her somewhere out in the country,he said they would only stay there temporarily,they lived in a tattered old barn house in a forest.They sometimes heard people rustling in the leaves behind the barn, there were quit voices they were worried voices,after five years the rustling stopped,the voices stopped all was quit then there were different sounds,they were brave voices and loud fires by a gun.They sneaked out of the barn and hid by a tree and prayed for there live as they held there breath the girl slipped a bit just to make the smallest sound,it got there attention,there was a tiny ditch right next to the tree she jumped in and her rugged loving father stepped out from behind the tree,then she heard a scream coming from the South everyone turned there heads in the approximate direction,the noise was coming from the south.All was silent until a big booming voice suddenly roared out with rage and then thumped over to the high pitched scream,the little girl blocked her ears and and shut her eyes tight and waited,the worried father heard someone stumble through the rugged bush and trip and another scream was heard for miles, there was a loud bang,and another very slow silent time again and the man came back again and said for the father to get on the ground and put his hands over his eyes and the man placed the cold gun towards his long hair and in a second he fell face down into the dark dirt the man walked of .The little girl waited and ran over to her dad,she stared at him and a tear dripped down her pale face she wept no more and walked to no pacific place.She made her way to a camping ground.She realized straight away that it was actually a place where the people with no home and no families,she walked in they all where focusing on something else,she saw the guy she hadn’t seen for a while now it was the man who was across the road,with the big stained windows,in the big dark room.The man looked at her and pretended to not know her and looked the other.She saw people running behind her she didn’t know what all the fear was about,so she decided to go,but she saw the guy at the front he was standing at the front staring at the view,the girl thought of telling him what was happening behind him she new his sir name from hearing it from about a year a go hearing it vaguely through the window she called out his surname,he acted like it he didn’t hear she,then she got grabbed sudennly by a big hand and pulled into a huge prickly bush and as he turned round he was shot. ===
 * In Germany in a little town called Hesee there was a little girl in a tattered white dress by the street how was very curious,a bit to curios,about the house just across the street. She hurried across the street to have a sneak peak as what was happening,shelooked through a bold stained glass window,the room was big and dark she saw to men talking like one of them didn’t do something right,one of them looked very tall and clumsy by the way he talked and moved,and the other one was completely the opposite,his body was built like a brick he looked invincible and he looked very angry all the time by the way he talked and the way he moved. **

= = 15th June 2012: We have been doing fun narritive writing using animation story tools like Creaza, Domo and Storybird which is the one that I have used. My story was about a woman who had to get a present for her friend for christmas. (the link is below)

http://storybird.com/books/xpnkaduktm/edit/
__“Rabbit Treasure.”__
 * Narrative Writing 15/2/12 **
 * WALT: write a narrative to entertain the reader, **
 * Purpose? **
 * To entertain the reader. **
 * Title... **
 * The sun glistened on the turquoise blue sea. The captain of the “SS Carrotcake” scanned the sea, searching for the sacred Easter Island which held the Golden Carrot. **


 * The captain’s carrot shaped binoculars scoped the horizon and finally located the island that he had been searching for. “Land ho! land ho!” bellowed the captain and the motley crew shouted “Hooray!” and jumped into the carrot dinghy’s to make their way to Easter Island. But on the way there they saw a floating Bunny Rabbit, then he looked so cute they pulled him up on to the carrot dinghy’s, and they didn’t realise but he planned a very evil plan to escape to the Island first and then steal the golden carrot first mwahahahaha!!!! **


 * Then as they were sailing of to the Island they saw a mad man dancing around a camp fire they whispered, “Hurry up we need to kill this man” **
 * Then the bunny’s jumped and made a brave decision to scurry across the camp ground and grab the golden carrot. **


 * And then when they got there they didn’t think of what to do to get out of there but luckily there brave little bunny member Wick Wock came out of a tree yelling “grab on!” and swung towards them and then they jumped on the vine and swung into the water, and so that the Pirates could save them and bring them on to there carrot dinghy. **


 * So they all went home happy and safe with there Golden Carrot. **
 * But guses what....they left the Mad man on Easter Island with no one even near him! **
 * The End **
 * By Esme and Kate... **

**For our Writing we did a pick a path story and it had to be about Fairy tales. And we had to do it in groups of five.** [|**To g**][|**o to our pick a path story press here.**]